not bad for a first effort, but most people dont want your name on their screens :)

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i agree with miri. without the text, but something else in the foreground, this could be a kick ass wall

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Good, but the upper portion needs something.

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if u centered the image, it would be better to instead of addin to the top

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The Force is strong with this one... Keep up the good work my friend. ;-)

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good work, (im harsh with everyone so live with it) asking not to be critisized has earned you the pussy award... dont want critisizim, dont upload. as for the art.. not bad.. have to agree with miriku, having your name on it makes it a bit cheesy, however the layout and positioning is good... centered objects are common as muck and lack creativity so yaaaaa for you... you have creativity. zeros and ones kinda suck... try using some free form text.. layering textures are also a good technique but try blending or deforming the texture so that its not as invasive in the wp. the freak ass lens flare is out of place and adds nothing to the wp, get rid of it. lighting effects on the central bars is good and the technique is purfect for your composition but the 3d tag is again lacking effort, anti-aliasing and funkyness... be proud you got a reveiw this long.. your on your way to making some funky wp's keep it up

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i dig it