Artist's Note
the first wallpaper i´ver ever created.
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It's like a bowl of vegetable soup.. too much crap you really don't want to eat.
Mon, Nov 14th at 11:27am (4 years ago)
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nice!
Sun, Nov 13th at 10:14am (4 years ago)
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its could be quite nice, but the composition isnt really there and there is quite a bit issue with the aliasing!
Sun, Nov 13th at 10:52am (4 years ago)
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I dont buy the "its good for a first" line. It doesnt matter if its your 1st or your 100th. If the wallpaper isnt that great, no one is going to say "well its not bad for a 1st, so Im going to use it". How many previous wallpapers you have made/submitted does not affect how this particular wallpaper looks... Now for my actual review, I would say that there are far too many elements smashed together. This lacks concept and composition. Needs more unity, so it doesnt feel like you just threw a bunch of stuff together.
Mon, Nov 14th at 12:33am (4 years ago)
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It's way too busy and would still need work in regards to anti-aliasing and such, but I have seen far worse wallpapers here. I think you can do great with more practice.
Mon, Nov 14th at 12:17pm (4 years ago)
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Not bad for a first try. In fact this reminds me soooo much of shinter's work. Don't know if you're familiar with him. (you should, he does have the hightest ranked/viewed wall on this site.) http://www.customize.org/list/user/shint
er/0/30/rank-desc
Thu, Nov 17th at 11:22pm (4 years ago)
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Created by Aic0N
on November 13th, 2005
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first of all. i like your critism. but i dont agree what frosted said about it dont matter how many i submittet and so on. you cant't expect a perfect wallpaper from someone who is doing it for, well, not so many times, to hava as great skill as a professional or someone else has. so i just wantet to collect some oppinions about that wallpaper and to know what i could do better about it.