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well damn this is a nice vector piece and the inclusion of three separate variations is very thoughtful. excellent colors and execution.
Thu, May 13th at 01:10am (9 years ago)
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i like the one with the sun rays
Wed, May 12th at 09:32pm (9 years ago)
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there's something funky with that shadow, the perspective is kinda off. if the sun is where you made it (in the distance), the shadow would be a little bit elongated, rather than an oval, and it would be on the other side of the umbrella. the clouds also have a different style from the rest of the piece, but this is really cool. also, what is that blue thing extending diagonally from the bottom left? a towel? it looks kind of flat.
Wed, May 12th at 11:28pm (9 years ago)
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it's totally blurry, lacks technically execution. and the shadow looks wrong indeed. UPD: Doorin was right, no blurryness indeed. I'd suggest not to compress that strongly next time. Doesn't change much of the impression though
Thu, May 13th at 01:37am (9 years ago)
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what hermik said, the execution could have been better. I like the one with the rays best though
Thu, May 13th at 02:15am (9 years ago)
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shadow is really awkward (i understand that that may have been how it was in the photo, but you can take a bit of artistic liscence with it). as for the rest, it's not bad, but its really not feature-worthy IMO. its really just too basic - more time could be taken with the details to really step it up. however, its not blurry at all - hermik may be judging from the compressed preview pic.
Thu, May 13th at 03:46am (9 years ago)
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I love it! Hot design and cool colors ;) Congrats on the featured :D
Thu, May 13th at 09:37am (9 years ago)
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I really like the rising sun one, the other two are great as well.
Thu, May 13th at 09:43am (9 years ago)
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the fact that you even used that font on the preview image makes me never want to download this.
Thu, May 13th at 10:49am (9 years ago)
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sorry i really dont like the colors.. they grey'ish tones (which are very very grayish) flush out the blue. maybe you could consider a more beige'ish tone?
Thu, May 13th at 12:46pm (9 years ago)
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another nice vector man, your getting better.
Thu, May 13th at 01:49pm (9 years ago)
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o.O I dont see why this is featured... the shadow is off if the sun is really comming from over there.. i dunno theres nothing too special about it really.
Thu, May 13th at 01:50pm (9 years ago)
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he's still learning he said.. i think this is good for still learning.. personally i liked you other ones better though. nice work.
Thu, May 13th at 02:04pm (9 years ago)
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i like it, gj [Report Comment]
Thu, May 13th at 03:50pm (9 years ago)
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I hate vectors. I don't mind this mushroom though.
Thu, May 13th at 07:45pm (9 years ago)
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meh the shadow is off and somehow feels generic , like something Ild find on a school folder in Wal-Mart.
Thu, May 13th at 09:18pm (9 years ago)
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I like the one with the sun the best,thanks.Not sure what they mean about blurry.
Tue, Jul 24th at 02:55pm (5 years ago)
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thanks for the featur mojo. I'm still learning how to do vectors so if my "execution" is off and the shadow is misplaced, and if this isn't really a featured piece o well. Overall i'm very happy with what i've done and i'll try to keep improving my style. scott dont judge a book by its cover. Mom shoulda taught yout that at a young age.
lol nick