I really like your using of random shards mixed with the more coherent 3d, but the bubbles and the overlay whirpool need to go, and if you made it on a slighter lighter background(at least above 50,50,50 RGB and an actual color rather than greyscale, like an orange/brown), maybe some light typography or better 2d, and this would be a fine piece.

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wich art program do you have?

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whoa. that is a very nice object. i don´t know about the colors for your background. the bubbles are really big. that is a good admin review!