far too busy and no real focal point. in addition to that, some of the lines look jaggy and aliased. there is some nice trendwhore style in here, it's just not focused on one thing.

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well it's certainly not BAD, but it's quite busy, and all that stuff really doesn't look quite good next to that lush earth, but whatever.

Atleast you try =P

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one word my friend... "Chaos"

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People are being way too tough. I like it. Lose the letterbox, higher res, and it would be really good.

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blue letterbox is bad - go with classic black if you want to make it look epic. also, like mojo said, there is no real focal point - while this in itself is not inherently bad, with this particular piece it makes it look like a big confused jumble of shtuff. a bit more thought put into the planning process would help your next piece.