It's hard to understand this image.. my eye's cant really focus on much more than the weird object in the middle which is not clearly defined. This needs a purpose, something more to go on.

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try to space your releases out, do three or four a day. Dumping like this tends to take away from individual pieces and push other's work of the front page prematurely. Again, I like your work. I wouldn't be suprised if the staff deleted a few of these.

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i dont know what to make of it

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haha, the xp thing is cool but rest of it is odd...theres too much shadowing but the dirty industrial look is pretty nice. but since the is the last piece in your uploading spree, i feel i need to say...DONT UPLOAD SO MANY DAMN PIECES AT A TIME, its obnoxious and diminishes others chances of getting their submission time on the front page.

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Please don't flood the system with your pieces, which by the way all look the same - boring, minimal, and rushed. None of them really caught my eye, and I think you need to explore other techniques as an artist that are beyond your comfort zone. Take some risks, explore new things, and please only submit one at a time :)

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To me, this just looks like some graphics for difference sites that's been spiced up yet? Maybe we'd be able to appreciate some of this better if he actually said something about it? I know I would if I coudl see some purpose in it...

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PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE do NOT do that again! anyway, on the piece: first, the XP thing clashes with the entire style. second, you must really know how to make use of your negative space. it overwhelms the piece, making it seem so empty.

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ok this one's not that good, but i looked at pretty much all of yours (which it is not a very nice idea to upload a gazillion at a time, save them for one a day) but some of your others i liked... but take more time on the ones that are obviously kinda half-done =P well at least your giving it a shot, eh!