Very trendy. The verticle "Expect nothing but the best" text doesn't fit very well. Neither does the bar code. It seems to be completely random to the subject of the piece.

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Let me start by saying I would love to put this on a T-Shirt. While a few aspects of it are terribly trendy, this is over all pretty cool. The up and down typo is bad...very bad indeed. the barcode could be toned down a bit, but everything else is like cold pizza. Kinda good.

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Looks like it came straight from a t-shirt. Not to say that it's bad - it's actually pretty cool - but I wouldn't think of it as a wallpaper. I guess it would be more of a....well, t-shirt.

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the idea of the balls is good and also well executed, the typo things sometimes doesn't seem to fit (the ones around the right ball is cool, though)

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it would make a great t-shirt

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Definately the vertical text is out of place. I like the style, and agree that it needs a filler under the "pool hall blues" however the bar code is just not it. you seemed to be on a role with the 8 ball and cue stick maybe there's other aspects of the pool hall experience that will lend itself to that space.

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i think you're a very underrated artist , youve produced a lot of really cool walls, not many of them are usable, but the ones that are are to a t, great job

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a tip - a barcode is usually made of only 0s and 1s

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put a little color in this, it's pretty nice