The object is quite nice and I'd stand to see it worked with a little better. Not liking the text.

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Design is nice for visual impact, but kind of stops short there ... very plain, not much goin on, dare i say it ... no 2d finish ^_^ ...

Typography either needs to go or to be very seriously improved ... try some more complex work, or it you feel up to it, take some hints from http://radio9x.deviantart.com on the fancy stuff ...

May also want to play around with losing the black borders at top and bottom ... they work ok, but getting past them is better, requires a bit more creativity to pull off ...

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Looks like light in movement, and I like the wide screen, but there isn't to much there, maybe is just me. Loose that text!! joking.... Most of the times wht happens with text is that, is there somewhere, but witn no reason. Try placing it outside the wide screen, at the top end of the "lights" and make it the same lenght of those.

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amazing..but the typo and the borders are not my taste...i'd play around with the hue/saturation and use it as a wp :)