So many things about this peice make it a star for a first wallpaper, and other things bring it down. The text on the upper left stands out way too much and has no meaning, no placement to being there. Try working it into the image a bit better. The same goes for the title text. Its too big and the the font choice isn't that great, along with the colored boxes. I really like how you have the eye peering out through the forest. Overall, its a very good job for your first wallpaper, but you just need to work out a few things. Keep it up Glow, I'll be looking forward to more stuff by you.

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This is one of the best wallpapers i've ever seen. Love that set of colors!

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if the top left text was lowered and the title text was a big smaller, and a better font it would be my new wall...i look forward to see more of your work!

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Good idea Glow but your wood pics aren t good ( blur ).. But a good first attempt :)

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I don't really care for wps that have their titles in big letters across them, but it does help to have something on the black band--in this case, the words and boxes aren't so bad. On the other hand, I'm so sick of pointless microtext I could scream

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Nice one! I would keep the coloured boxes but align the title text so that it's the same length of the array of boxes. The text column at the top left of the screen can disappear.

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i like the colors boxes, o la la, the wall paper is kewl, i just thought i would coment on the micro text......it has been overused, and i think the way you do have text up there would be bad as crap if it was some type of peom or stange short story , simply to add some meaning to the text, so from now on i say!! lets ad meaning to our meaningless text!! Auooo gaa!