Lots of the things going on in this wallpaper has a very unique idea. You tried to make the piece of motion and a sense of going somewhere. But there are several things that hurt it. The color effects are really bright and really stand out. When I look at this, my eye keeps looking at that eye, and its FREAKY! =) Try just having the pupil of the eye in the piece instead of the whole eye ... I'd like to see what it looks like. Very chaotic and very original piece, just needs some tweaks.

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Is "Fuck Top"

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the red grid is way too bright and competes for attention with the eyeball. and i think this needs some anti-aliasing cuz everything's too jagged.

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you used too much contrast...literally "burns my eyes" to look at